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Led by an invisible hand, Archaeologist Bryan Stewart joins forces with a shadowy organization against an extremist group to find the elusive cradle of Humanity.
SYNOPSIS:
Six months after waking from a coma, archaeologist BRYAN STEWART receives a series of mysterious visions about Eden. He embarks on a journey with his assistant, JIMMY LEE, to discover the truth about those visions. KHAN, the extremist group leader who sworn to protect all ancient relics, is determined to stop Bryan.
Through AUDREY WHITE, the duo allies with the shadowy XEON Foundation that posses technology beyond human comprehension and seems to know about Bryan's visions. The expedition team evades the extremists and arrives in the Mediterranean, and Jimmy secretly uses his Moral Compass to help Bryan locates Eden, which is now under the Mediterranean Sea. Khan learns about Bryan's location through a mysterious 3rd party and begins his hunt.
Just as they begin to study the undersea site, the extremists launch an all-out assault. Jimmy and Audrey join forces to defeat Khan but, Jimmy is gravely injured. Jimmy finally reveals his true identity and entrusts the Moral Compass to Bryan. The siege ends with Bryan and Jimmy falling into the sea. Bryan almost drowned but is found and saved. Jimmy remains missing.
In the aftermath of the siege, the XEON Foundation reveals that Bryan is a Chosen One selected by ancient artifacts known as Gifts. These artifacts bind themselves to their host's brain to grant them superior intellect. The founders believe Bryan is summoned to Eden because it is the Gifts' birthplace. However, a devious organization has stolen Bryan's Gift using the extremists.
End of Part One