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THE CURSE OF BLOODY MARY
By Ian Thompson
After summoning an ancient spirit, a pregnant teenage girl finds herself succumbing to her evil curse, going from soft and kind to cruel and uncaring.
SYNOPSIS:
A group of teenage girls at a slumber party decide to play a game of Bloody Mary in the bathroom mirror. After playing, Marsha, a pregnant teen worried about her future, finds herself being constantly tormented by Bloody Mary everywhere she looks. As she tries to get rid of her she slowly becomes more cruel and hostile to her closest love ones as Bloody Mary takes over her spirit.
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Neat start, Ian! I do think that we need to spell out the stakes a bit more. HOW evil is this spell? HOW cruel and uncaring (and dangerous?) does this make her? Is her unborn child at risk of being the second coming of this ancient spirit?
Fun stuff to play with here, though!