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When a pioneer doctor uncovers a series of bizarre murders in Indian country, he must join forces with the beaten-down Lakota to confront a mysterious tribe of sub-human cannibals and save his prairie town from the cannibals’ dark god, a bloodthirsty sentient tornado.
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Other than the clear appeal of having a Native American-centered story, this is a very well-crafted logline. We know the protagonist, the goal/imperative, and the escalation of challenges including the stakes should he fail (the destruction of his prairie town). Great work!
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