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When women of color mysteriously vanish from a prestigious university, Detective Isis Davenport embarks on a high-stakes undercover mission, risking everything to uncover the truth. With the unexpected aid of her determined daughter, who dreams of following in her mother's footsteps, they confront a shadowy conspiracy that will test their bond and redefine justice.
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UNACCOUNTED FOR sounds interesting and intense, Shanese Shields! It's something I'd watch.
Your logline is long (54 words). I suggest keeping your logline to 35 words or less. Loglines can be two sentences, but a one-sentence logline sounds better in my opinion, and it takes less time for a producer, director, etc. to read it. Names in loglines are usually for biopics, well-known stories, and franchises (like Mission: Impossible). If you're producing this yourself, disregard what I said. :)
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Sounds engaging.
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