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DATING MY EX
By Mercy Jane Porquez Ballesteros
After losing the woman of his dreams, a world-renowned architect tries to win her back by making her fall in love with him – all over again.
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I like the title and concept, Mercy Jane Porquez Ballesteros. I think your logline needs a little work though. Here's a logline suggestion: "After losing the woman of his dreams, a _______ (an adjective) man tries to win her back by making her fall in love with him all over again."
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Thank you Maurice Vaughan
You're welcome, Mercy Jane Porquez Ballesteros.
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MJPB, your logline sounds exciting. Are there any quirks or flaws with these characters that may provide obstacles in there reuniting?
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