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LIONS FLIGHT

LIONS FLIGHT
By Dia Warinn

GENRE: Romance, Drama
LOGLINE:

A Maasai hunter caught between two worlds moves to Australia to build a hunting lodge but falls for a passionate wildlife conservationist, forcing him to choose between his past and a future he never expected.

SYNOPSIS:

His heart is Maasai, his lineage split. Kai lives in two worlds; heir to a big game hunting empire under his White South African fathers’ sadistic rule, and as a committed, engaged tribal member for the memory of his loving Massai mother. After a heart wrenching loss and with hope of escaping a tortured past and dark future, he’s enticed by a childhood friend’s invitation to build their dream; a naturalist bowhunting lodge. Kai commits to Adam’s partnership with a large investment, abandons his inheritance, says goodbye to his tribe for now, and lands in Western Australia for a fresh start.

What he doesn’t know is that the land he’s invested in is a struggling sanctuary run by a fiery conservationist with no desire to sell, and Adam’s current partner. Feeling jilted by the woman he loved, Adam turned on Tara and financially ran the sanctuary into the ground.

In an instant, Kai and Tara are inexplicably drawn to each other, unable to deny their souls connection. They’ve each met their match, and opposites attract as opposing world views clash. Adam’s jealousy rages, so he betrays Kai to his vengeful father. Boyhood dreams shatter. Addiction spirals. Secrets are exposed. Passion ignites. Betrayal consumes. Everything’s on the line as African and Australian forces collide.

LIONS FLIGHT

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Marcos Fizzotti

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Maurice Vaughan

I'd watch this, Dia Warinn! It reminds me of movies like “Water for Elephants,” “Coming to America,” and “Crocodile Dundee.”

I think your logline needs some work. Something like: “After a captivating young heir to a hunting empire falls hard for a wildlife warrior, she tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/strives to/sets out to/fights/battles/etc. _______ (goal of story) so/to/in order to ________ (stakes).”

Tasha Lewis 2

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Dia Warinn

Hello All! Thanks for feedback. Appreciate it.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Dia.

Dia Warinn

Maurice - also a special thanks for suggestion. Still working on it and this helps.

Sebastian McGrogan

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Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Dia Warinn. Glad it helps.

Dia Warinn

Hi! Just added updated logline, synopsis and script. Would love feedback. Doing well with script review services and competition, and always striving to improve. Appreciate your time and interest!

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