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In a small Midwest town during the Great Depression, a struggling young cartoonist must find a way to become successful and marry his sweetheart before his wealthy brother does.
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Nate Rymer Thanks for the rating but I just revised the logline--see if you like this one better.
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Nate Rymer Thank you! I wonder if "find a way to become successful" is too vague.
I would write such a logline - a young cartoonist challenges his rich brother for the love of a woman they both want to marry.
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Nate Rymer Thanks for the rating but I just revised the logline--see if you like this one better.
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Nate Rymer Thank you! I wonder if "find a way to become successful" is too vague.
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I would write such a logline - a young cartoonist challenges his rich brother for the love of a woman they both want to marry.
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