Nice work, Anna, I think that this is super super clear. However, I don't think that you need the comps mentioned at the tail end of the logline; it actually threw me off a bit because my brain jumped to an entirely different movie (STAND BY ME), and then I found myself thinking about those comps as opposed to the logline/your story as a whole. You already have too much good stuff going on here to run that risk :)

The story is interesting, Anna Agostino. I think the logline needs a little work (just a little). How about: "After a schoolmate's sister gets kidnapped, a group of small-town kids takes justice into their own hands and searches for her."

You might be able to add a time clock in the logline (if there's one in the story): "After a schoolmate's sister gets kidnapped, a group of small-town kids takes justice into their own hands and tries to find her before ________."

I think you could put "Think Lean on Me meets Big Little Lies" into the synopsis section.

Hello Anna, nice and simple, good luck with it

Thanks everyone for your constructive criticism. It's funny I actually meant to compare my story to "Stand by me," I don't know how but I ended up typing the wrong movie name. I made some changes so hopefully it's an improvement.