I like the concept, Demian Cuthbertson. I see the irony in it: An underachieving bachelor trying to help someone with their love life.

I think the logline needs more detail. I suggest adding the inciting incident and the stakes.

Thanks, extremely grateful for the feedback!

You're welcome, Demian Cuthbertson. This is kinda like a family version of "Hitch" (not "family version" as in the Family genre, but the bachelor and nephew are family).