A marine veteran gets cursed by an ancient book that brings everyone he killed back to life to kill him. He needs to figure out how to break the curse before it breaks his mind, body and spirit.

SYNOPSIS:

7 crucial logline questions:

1. Is there room to strengthen the protagonist’s goal?

2. Is there room to strengthen the force of antagonism in opposition to this

goal?

3. How would you rate what’s at stake? Are the stakes high or low? If you think

they’re low, how would you make them higher?

4. Do you get a sense that this movie will cover the most extraordinary period

in the protagonist’s life? If not, do you have any suggestions as to how to

make this more apparent?

5. Is there a clear sense of genre, or mix of genres? Do you understand the

world and target audience of this movie?

6. What do you think of the sense of irony? If there isn’t any do you think it

would benefit from adding some?

7. Do you “see” the movie just from the logline?

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