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CHAOS WHISPER
By Ishta Lamara
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I'm not sure how "After a haunted house collapses on a changeling teen" ties in with the rest of the logline, Ishta Lamara.
Does "he must face" mean "battle"? If so, I would replace "he must face" with "he must battle."I would add a comma after "teen."
That is the incident that turn the wheels. there will be no battle ..Thanks Maurice.