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A woman goes on a cycling holiday in France, but when her friends steal something from local hunters called the Brethren, they disrupt an old ritual, and must flee for their lives as the Brethren and a deadly creature stalk them in the forest.
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Without a synopsis, it's difficult to know the tweaks to this horror trope you're making. So far, it sounds like standard fare, except for the setting which is probably gorgeous. That's why I only gave 4 stars. Need more information.
Hi Jenean McBrearty, yes, a synopsis would flesh it out a bit(e) more. The wolf doesn't pop up out of thin air in Normandy, it is a little more intricate. I need to learn how to write a synopsis (it's something I've been putting off). Thanks for the rating and feedback for this and the other logline.