A novel premise.

Good logline. My tip:is to follow this formula: When (say flaw of) protagonist attempt to rekindle relationship with her (secondary character, again state flaw of this character).... It's an interesting premise, for sure. I like to keep my loglines as succinct as possible, but state the characters' flaws and give the viewer a sense of what they must do to overcome their flaws and accomplish their goal. Wishing you the best of luck!

I'm intrigued - AND I want to know more!

Thank You Kevin Enners for your insight and opinion. It's important for me. Thank you.

Thank you Bill Hoversten I appreciate that! Thanksss and we will have more :)

Very interesting. I'd like to know more.

Thank you Robert James Atton for your rate to my Logline :)

Wow, I'm intrigied. The concept is so cool. Never thought of that kind of "what if"... Amazing. I'd totally watch it!

Oh Thank you @Vuyiseka Geza, I am pleased :)

Thank you @Vuyiseka, my pleasure :)

Following Kevin Enners' advice, what about tweaking it a little bit:

When two kindred spirits reincarnate as women, their attempt to rekindle their cosmic romance on earth is hampered by their newfound terrestrial fears and beliefs.

Beautiful love between beautiful women. I'd love to see this movie!

Thank you Sarah and Ingrid :)