Screenwriting : Two things that make an engaging screenplay by Phillip E. Hardy, "The Pro From Dover"

Phillip E. Hardy, "The Pro From Dover"

Two things that make an engaging screenplay

God knows, as do some of you forum dwellers do, that Uncle Phil strives to bring you interesting articles and topics. I found this short article today about writing engaging screenplays by J. Gideon Sarantinos. In his article, Mr. Sarantinos puts forth the premise that screenwriters get too hung up on two things:

1) Performing too much research

2) Striving for perfection

Now these are two things Uncle Phil never does. I always say do enough research to where you feel comfortable writing your chosen topic or subject. For example, I'm working on a whimsical comedy and needed some information on the California Lottery. I spent about five minutes to learn enough for what I needed. In other words, I researched while working on the script. But that doesn't mean I don't do upfront research when it's required. But only enough to get me going.

I also see writers laboring for months to make their script perfect. And changing things their writing friends tell them don't work or how to improve they can improve their story. And many writers also tend to stick with what's formulaic. They suffer from what the writer calls a clinical approach where we stick to familiar patterns because it's comfortable. I admit that I'm sometimes guilty of that one aspect.

So without further ado. Here's the link to the article. This guy's website is also pretty good. I couldn't find out much info on the guy but maybe some of you are familiar with him.

https://gideonsway.wordpress.com/2018/02/27/what-makes-an-engaging-scree...

What Makes An Engaging Screenplay?
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Bill Costantini

He used to post - or try to post - in the screenwriting forum on the weekends, and within a day his post was always moved to Your Stage. He didn't have that Grizzly Adams beard back then, either, but I think I can safely say it is finally official: there are now more aspiring script consultants than aspiring screenwriters.

As Sam Kinison would say: AHHHHH! AHHHHH! AHHHHHH! Heh-heh.

Phillip E. Hardy, "The Pro From Dover"

Bill C

Several of my posts have also been moved to Your Stage. It's the Siberia of stage32 lounges.

Doug Nelson

I think that many writers spend more time researching than writing. Maybe it's their excuse for not writing.

Robert Kaufmann

Good pacing and suspense.

Peter Roach

Thanks for slapping me upside the head. I do both. I obsess on getting it right. A reviewer once told me "You wrote a science manual not a screenplay." First time I understood that I let my research get in the way of a good story.

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