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SYNOPSIS:
The story centers around Charlie, an undercover police officer deeply embedded with the Italian mafia. What appears to be a fairly cut-and-dry story takes an odd turn when Charlie's best friend is killed and he experiences an emotional breakdown. Charlie is a fascinating enigma: explosively violent at times, manic at others, and altogether an entertaining main character. The conflict in the film is man vs. man, although the true antagonist is Charlie's inner demons.
I like where you're going with this, showing more the more internal, personal battle that is tearing charlie apart. :)