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NATURE'S SUPERHEROES: THE ELEMENTS
By Timika Chambers
Earth baptizes children superheroes to save itself and the universe from mass destruction.
SYNOPSIS:
When the asteroid hit Earth 66 billion years ago, parts of the asteroid lodged in Earth's lithosphere. The asteroid was an attempt to destroy the light angel, Shoko, after the dark angels took over Planet UR, the center of the universe. It is now 2026, and Earth reveals the superheroes it has chosen to save itself. The superheroes face the challenges of aligning with their supernatural powers, restoring light to humanity, and saving Earth and beyond.
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If the elements are the superheroes, why are the children the superheroes? Are the children elements?
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Thank you so much Rose for commenting. Yes...Earth baptizes the children in its Elements to save itself.
I am purposefully not reading your synopsis as you logline should ideally stand on its own. Is Earth personified? Who is responsible for the mass destruction? What is the form of mass destruction? Nuclear war? Pollution? A rogue asteroid? The connection between the use of “elements” in the title and “children” is not clear to me. If the earth is damaged, nature will fix it over time. Children aren’t necessary. Making children responsible for saving the planet is a heavy ask. It could seem almost immoral, if not presented in the right way.
Sample Logline: In “Nature’s Superheroes: The Elements,” Earth awakens the latent powers of chosen children, transforming them into elemental superheroes. Tasked with averting a cosmic disaster poised to annihilate humanity, these newly empowered guardians must harness their extraordinary abilities to protect Earth and the universe from an ancient celestial threat.
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Hi Rose! Thanks for the sample...definitely something to consider.
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