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FINDING ELPIS 7: ENCORE
By Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

GENRE: Science Fiction, Adventure
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When the River Lethe overflows, Elpis returns on their galactic tour with a mission to save everyone's memories--and the particles comprising the universe itself--from Oblivion.

Grant “Wiggy” Wiggins

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Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

Thanks for the five stars, Grant “Wiggy” Wiggins!

Sijun Cui

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Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

Thank you for the five stars as well, Sijun Cui!

Wyman Brent

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Wyman Brent

From what I have heard so far beyond your logline, it is a brilliant concept with huge potential.

Marcos Fizzotti

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Elle Bolan

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Elle Bolan

Girl', I need your logline secrets! These are great.

Jim Boston

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Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

Thank you so much for the five stars, everyone! This logline was so tricky for me to pin down so it really means a lot!

Thank you, Wyman Brent~ I'm really excited to get to this one so I'll work really hard on BoFS and SiR!

Thanks so much Elle Bolan, I rewrote this one several times until I was happy with it. The trick with this one was to not overstate the plot ;) like when you're drawing, you have to be careful with the finer lines to not make them too light, but also not heavy enough to smudge.

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