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THE PALE MAN

THE PALE MAN
By Abdusamad Shafiev

GENRE: Fantasy, Drama
LOGLINE:

During an incident involving a fight in a subway car, passengers recording what is happening on their smartphones come to a state of extreme horror and strive to leave the car at the next station as soon as possible because of The Pale Man sitting in the car.

SYNOPSIS:

In a subway car, a Pale man, sitting on a bench, watches the passengers, wondering at their fascination with smartphones and closeness.

At one stop, a quarreling Guy and a Girl enter the carriage, which annoys the passengers, but they do not dare to interfere.

The Pale man stares at them intently, which unnerves the Girl, and the Guy rudely asks him to stop. Two passengers intercede for Pale, which causes a fight with a Girl and a Guy.

Many starts filming on their smartphones and point in horror at the silent Pale man. When the train stops, all but two passengers, a Girl, a Guy and a Pale One, get out of the cars screaming.

After the fight, the girl, combing her hair, looking at her reflection in the glass of the car window, screams, and the Guy, looking towards her hand, also screaming, runs in horror to another car. They get off at the next station, where they meet the police. The police, entering the carriage, want to talk to Pale, but two passengers explain the situation to them, and at the next station they leave.

Pale and another passenger remain in the carriage. When the train arrives at the end of the metro station, they stand at the door, and the passenger sees only his reflection in the glass and is horrified. Pale, turning to face him, smiles and shows his vampire fangs

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