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It’s Christmas Eve at the dazzling Gold Fortune Casino: blackjack, cocktails, and holiday bets are in full swing. Then the doors burst open — in charges a runaway turkey, flapping through tables with a desperate butcher on its heels. What follows is a feather-fueled comedy of errors: slot machines jackpot, security invents “Code Cranberry,” gamblers cheer like sports fans, and even the lounge singer keeps crooning through the chaos. The mayhem peaks when the turkey leaps onto the roulette wheel, nudging the ball onto a jackpot number that makes every gambler a winner. The butcher is defeated, the crowd chants the bird’s name, and the turkey — Santa hat tilted, martini in wing — struts off into Christmas legend.
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Well, you already know what I think of your screenplay. I really like your cover model. However, I admit to liking your other screenplay models even more.
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Wyman, thanks for the 5⭐️ and the feedback — glad the turkey gave you a smile. He may not be as glamorous as my other ‘models,’ but he sure knows how to steal a scene. Appreciate the support across my projects!
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Charmane Wedderburn, some of your projects look better than others and some are funnier than others. Let me know if you ever need another slice of turkey wisdom. After all, I was in Turkey long ago.
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“Big thanks to everyone who took the time to read, rate, and support my loglines. Every bit of feedback, every star, keeps me pushing bolder and brighter. These stories are for the fearless — and I’m grateful you’re part of the journey.
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Charmane Wedderburn, you are very welcome. Now I want to return to Istanbul so that I can read this logline again.
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Haha Wyman, if my logline has you booking flights back to Istanbul, I must be doing something right. Thanks for riding this creative wave with me — more stories, more journeys, always ahead
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Thank you to everyone who took the time to rate and comment on my loglines. Your support and feedback mean the world — every star, every word, pushes the work forward. Grateful for this community and excited to keep building stories together.
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Charmane Wedderburn, I actually had a brithday in Istanbul. And it was also Thanksgiving in the USA that day. So, there I was in Turkey having my birthday on what my family would call turkey day.
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