Paul Hubbard's Lounge Discussions

Welcome, Rheah! Love your attitude, fits your photo. I'm a novelist doing what you're doing, working toward next level.

Welcome, Rheah

Hi. I'm a screenwriter. Currently wavering in the face of the great unknown that is a first novel.

Welcome Rheah. Keep coming back.

Maybe it's time to seek out some contests. Out of the six, you could very well have some contest contenders ready to go ... good luck! AJ

Podcast - https://www.nycastings.com/author/aaronseals/

I also have seen several of the Master class series, including Scorcese's and found it surprising but inspirational re: sticking to the vision. I believe they have a new deal available where you can pay a set fee and see as many of the classes as you need in the Master series.

Jade Robinson check out https://www.studiobinder.com/blog/best-filmmaking-and-screenwriting-podc... with a podcast, you’re more flexible, so you can listen to them wherever you want to.

Audrey Helps Actors! I LOVE this podcast and it's very no-nonsense advice. https://itunes.apple.com/us/podcast/audrey-helps-actors/id1233482206?mt=2

My YouTube channel for all storytellers, including actors, launches next month. This article on auditioning just posted today on Stage 32. Perhaps it will be helpful to you: https://www.stage32.com/blog/Preparing-for-Auditions-7-Guided-Script-App...

I am 25 pages in at the moment.

Have given it to my wife for quick read. There is a sequence that will be repeated in the story and I need her thoughts on pace. I wont tell her that. Just ask, "what do you think".

The cast looks like this:

Mish[1]

Sue[2]

Rose[3]

Harv[4]

Allan[5]

Noah[6]

[7] - died in the opening scene - we never get to know him.

Jill[8]

Frank[9]

Bess[10]

They never are allowed to use names. "Hey five" or "I'll help four"

Doing this I get the images a Harv or Rose gives and the story works internally.

Thanks everyone again.

If you want to read the script. It will eventually be up at Script Revolution.

omg your spouse reads your material? So lucky!

I have to choose it carefully. I can’t give her everything, just the good stuff.

Craig, I have this to say. Ever see the British TV Series, 'The Prisoner'? It was on in the 60's. Pretty much answers this question. You should, if you haven't already, check it out.

Write on!

Could you preface a number with a color for the wards they are in, especially if they are divided by sex. Blue 1A Red2B

I do have various projects in development if you want to take a look a them. My youtube channel , www.youtube.com/c/DavidTimberDKT has various ongoing projects.

Hi there are you still looking for talent, if not possibly crew?

Hi, Simon. Sent you links before. Have new headshots now. W;ll semd if you can PM me. bobmbsrr@gmail.com Thabnks.

www.lelandkrane.com - have my own Alexa package and I'm willing to travel though I am based in NY

Hello Simon. I am an Actor. 6', 160lbs and love the outdoors. V-Ball, Hike Bike Horses etc. Something told me to let my Blonde curly hair and Red beard grow before visiting my brother in LA next week. Are you out there? Too late to play a cowboy but definitely can be Icelandic etc.

Congratulations on keeping the momentum up and getting results. I found (after spending an extraordinary amount of money) that the $45 paid pitches here on this site were not a wise investment. Many script requests but it was like pulling teeth to even get a response.

Would you mind sharing what service you used to get it sent to so many agents? Thank-you.

Thank you all. Alle, good to know you and Anton have met before. No introductions needed. :)

Paul, I went through three rewrites and hired a script consultant to get the script ready, then got some professional feedback on my query letter and my logline as well (I still tend to write my log lines like tag lines, hard habit to break)

Thanks, David. I just finished my second script. I decided to send it in for coverage. I hope that improves my process.

Sounds great, Paul! Onward and upward. Keep writing. :)

Always.

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