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A cantankerous toddler learns about love, death, and loss when he visits daycare for the first time.
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Confusion ensues when two-year-old Teddy is dropped off at daycare and meets a group of babies that is made up of an angry cowboy, a quiet German, a tough redhead, and a spontaneous glamour girl named Olive who can’t seem to get her lipstick straight. But, when he and Olive sequester themselves in an empty room with a puzzling painting that shows an old, lonely couple and Olive collapses, Teddy slowly begins to realize that his life isn’t as linear as he once thought.
This is terrific. Nicely written log line, says volumes and I love the concept. But ... is this a comedy-drama kind of thing? Could work any way you spin it.
You hit it on the nose! Added the synopsis too.
Hi Ryan, DM me your email and I will send it right over!
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This sounds GREAT!
Thanks Valerie!
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this one i like the most
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This sounds clever.
Hey Marcelo and Mitch, I appreciate you both commenting. It has a comedic element that people seem to be drawn to. It is definitely one of my favorites. Thanks for checking it out!
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Sounds cute and interesting.
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cute!
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