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Nuclear scientist Tom, his brave, spunky 12-year-old daughter Stephanie, and NASA mission commander Theresa join forces during a First Contact. Tom finds himself risking his career, custody of his daughter, and possibly his life, to save his new alien friend while attempting to prevent the annihilation of Earth.
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The search for energy leads NASA to travel back to the moon. Mission team members unexpectedly experience a “first contact” with an alien race similar to humans. The aliens’ planet is in danger due to an impending supernova, and they seek the U.S. government’s help in a massive relocation effort to another planet, in exchange for technology that will solve earth’s energy problems and also provide interstellar travel capability. Different factions on both planets have competing agendas and not everyone is in favor of the joint effort that the United States and alien government are moving forward. The ultimate survival of the aliens and preventing the annihilation of Earth by a rogue alien faction are at stake.
My goal is for the novel to entertain by providing a story that the reader can immerse themselves in. Because one of my main characters is an alien with a great sense of humor and love for cultural references named Lanjo (he is a research scientist that has specialized in extensive studies of Earth culture, both in the broad sense and with a specialization in American culture and history) the novel has serious goals and technological pursuits peppered with humorous references and relationship growth as the main characters interact. I plan on completing the story as a novel first, then adapting it as a screenplay. UPDATE: Alien Neighbors the novel is published and recommended reading by Kirkus Reviews.
Since I posted this logline so many years ago - my novel, Alien Neighbors, has been completed and has garnered awards and favorable reviews. You can learn more about Alien Neighbors here: https://nancygoldenbooks.com/alien-neighbors-science-fiction/
You can learn more or purchase it here: https://www.amazon.com/Alien-Neighbors-Nancy-Golden-ebook/dp/B09JYDGF7B/
My next step is to either pursue getting the book optioned for film or to write the screen play myself and seek representation. This step is in the queue behind the fantasy trilogy I am currently writing.
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I was on the Board of the L5 Society and one of two Board Members who voted against merging with the National Space Institute to form the National Space Society.
William Gunn Are you a member of NSS now? I got to attend and speak at the 2023 ISDC: https://nancygoldenbooks.com/2023/05/30/retrospective-our-first-internat...
William Gunn Very cool you knew Robert Heinlein - that letter is a treasure!! Thanks for your comments.