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Twenty-five years after losing her twin brother, the daughter of a well-known author sets out to pen her own book exposing the person she believes is responsible for his death - their mother.
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Twenty-five years after the death of her five-year-old twin brother, Sarah Prescott struggles with her mental health and day-to-day life. Despite years of effort from Sarah’s father to repair the family’s fractured relationship, her cold and resentful mother continues to blame Sarah for her brother's death. Aside from her father, the one person who gives Sarah the love, support, and comfort she needs is Dominic, a childhood friend who has always been there for her since her brother’s passing. Only after the sudden death of her beloved father, when Sarah needs Dominic the most, he is nowhere to be found. Now alone, Sarah is forced to confront the consequences of her childhood trauma and accept certain realities that may be hard to swallow.
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How about his: A fragile woman must finally confront the consequences of her severe childhood trauma while struggling to deal with her mother, who blames her for her brother’s death twenty-five years prior
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What a wonderful suggestion! Thank you so much, Kacee, for your input. I appreciate the help, immensely. :)
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My pleasure!!!
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Congratulations on being a Bronze winner. I wish you more success with this and other projects.
Thank you, Robert!
Please check my post, above. I have reworked the logline and would love your opinions on it! :)
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This sounds amazing. I'd be curious to read it sometime.
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The way the logline is rewritten is much better - very intriguing.
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