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THE CATERING COMPANY
By J.B. Bettiol

GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE:

A small-town catering company must compete for honors and events when the famous local barbecue restaurant begins to offer catering services of their own. 

Onwukwe Abraham Ogonna

Rated this logline

Adam Jestin

Take out a few words here and there:

A small-town catering company must compete with a famous restaurant that begins to offer catering services of its own.

J.B. Bettiol

Once again, I appreciate the suggestion - but your suggestion mentions nothing of how the small-town catering company and the famous restaurant are related or what's at stake. Thanks again!

Adam Jestin

I see we are going to keep disagreeing. No worries. Cheers!

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