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GALAXY HOUNDS
By Sam M Smith
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Sounds like an exciting Animation/Action story, Sam M Smith! Love the title.
I think the logline needs some work. Here's a suggestion (a very rough suggestion Haha):
"Stranded after being ambushed on a mission, a _______ (adjective) Galactic Bloodhound gets rescued by the Federation's enemies. ________ (something like "Now in the company of pirates"), he ________ (goal of story) to ________ (stakes)."
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