Angela Olinghouse: Screenwriter in Santa Monica, California.

SUPER SINGLES
GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE:

Four female superheroes fight hard to keep bad guys out of their city but can't seem to keep them out of their beds. Let's face it: Dating can be criminal.

Dustin Quinteros

I love this idea, the title is great, and would 100% watch this but the logline could be condensed to one sentence. "out of their beds, because let's face it, dating can be criminal. Maybe edit it down a little, do you really need words like "hard" and "seem to". (it's tough) :)

When [INCITING INCIDENT OCCURS]…

A [CHARACTER TYPE]…

Must [OBJECTIVE]…

Before [STAKES].

Dustin Quinteros

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Angela Olinghouse

Thanks for the feedback, Dustin!

Daniel Burnam

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Richard "RB" Botto

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Amanda Toney

Hello Angela -

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