THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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GUARDIAN OF ASH
By John Austin
Pursued across realms by the creatures that laid waste to her home, the last elf must learn to harness the power of a mysterious orb or Earth will be the next world to die.
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Ouch Amazing Kacee! Not a fan, I take it? Any suggestions for improvement?
Elf? https://screencraft.org/2020/02/26/the-simple-guide-to-writing-a-logline/
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Forgive me, I'm uncertain why "elf" is problematic? The protagonist is an elf.
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