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A film director must shoot a musical during a playoff game amid heralding flashbacks, and a symbolic theft, and must solve her losing team's first half blow-out for a successful film.
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Carla Van Gogh is a supervisor during a playoff game. Ever since closing a beleaguered car lot, she's been preparing a musical feature film for "game day". On game day, however, traumatic memories from the business haunt her during the shoot. She must conquer these, solve an unexpected, symbolic theft and her team's first half blowout for a successful film. As the teams battle to win, security's mobilization to apprehend thieves creates a thrilling ride for original music, suspense and closure.
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31 word Logline sums up the screenplay!...
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You forgot a subject “she” after the 2nd and? The logline is not precise.
Being a song writer, you must be good in writing dialogues. When I need an inspiration during writing my script, I listen to songs and feel at awe. Of their genius.Rated this logline
Such an interesting and fun idea for a plot. But that Logline needs work.
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