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A middle aged woman comes out of semi-retirement to become a professor at a local college while trying to avoid her former career as an attorney.
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Hi, India. For a logline, avoid don't start with "About" or that word in an introductory phrase at all. You want to set forth four things in your logline and make sure it's as short and as intriguing as possible. The four things are:
Protagonist (with at least one adjective to describe her)
The antagonist
The main goal or desire of the protagonist
The main obstacles to the protagonist in reaching said goal
Hope this helps!
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