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THE MAGIC IN THE SADDLE
By Connie Barretta
When two friends on a scavenger hunt discover a mystical carousel with a banned unicorn and talking animals who have given up on seeing children ride again, Erin and Billy set out on a journey to find the items necessary to break the Wizard’s spell and restore the animals belief.
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Great logline! May I suggest to replace "two children" with "Erin and Billy", or maybe tell us their relationship, "When siblings Erin and Billy ..." or "When classmates Erin and Billy..."
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Thank you! Great idea!