Hi, Heather L McQuaid. Unique concept. What's the Dreamcaster's goal?

Hi Maurice Vaughan just saw this message now. Her goal is to survive, not get caught by the government. I have a new logline that better answers your excellent question.

Hi, Heather L McQuaid. How are you doing? Hope things are great.

I don't remember the last series logline, but I like your new one. I think the second part of the logline could use some work though.

Based on your comment, how about one of these loglines:

"When a compliant librarian who can craft dreams is accused of murdering a prominent Senator, she flees to avoid being executed by the government's brutal Enforcers."

"When a compliant librarian who can craft dreams is accused of murdering a prominent Senator, she flees to avoid being executed by brutal government Enforcers that are tracking her."

Also, does she have an overall series goal besides surviving/not getting caught by the government? Like taking down the government? If so, you might want to put that in the series logline.

Thanks Maurice Vaughan , think I"ll add "the Government's brutal enforcers" as that's the most concise. :).

A lot more happens in the series. She becomes a blackmarket dreamcaster, re-unites with the mother who abandoned her (and who is now the rebel leader) finds out the Senator is her father, she's captured by the Government forces and if offered a deal--use her powers to help her father become the US president. Big showdown at the end, she barely survives, and is changed forever-- she embraces her frightening power and christens herself Melinoe (based on the goddess of dreams and nightmares). So, yeah, I need to prioritise what goes in the series logline. :)

Thanks again for reading and suggesting.

You're welcome, Heather L McQuaid. It sounds like a REALLY unique series.