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LAUGH WITH ME
By Sabrina Miller
Fed up with her transphobic southern town and intolerant father, a cash-strapped, witty transgender woman relocates to San Francisco where she navigates homelessness while pursuing a career in stand-up comedy.
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Tasha Lewis, thanks for taking the time to rate my logline. I really appreciate the feedback!
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I agree with, PK. A series would be fantastic.
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PK Vandegrift and E.M. Watson I like the idea of turning Laugh Like an Ally into a series--something like The Marvelous Mrs. Maisel meets Euphoria. Thanks for your feedback! Cheers.
Of course!
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I love the complexity of this setup. Nicely conceived!
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Crystal clear protagonist, incident, and goal. Only (minor) comment is whether 'navigating homelessness' could be a bit punchier. Like, 'battles with poverty and homelessness'...
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Heather L McQuaid. I agree that the phrase "navigating homelessness" could be punchier --something like, "struggles to overcome the cycle of homelessness." That would definitely heighten the drama of the logline. Thanks for the feedback. Cheers!
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Ryan, thanks for taking the time to rate my logline. I recently revised it to:
Fed up with her transphobic southern town and intolerant father, a cash-strapped, witty transgender woman relocates to San Francisco where she struggles to escape the cycle of homelessness while pursuing a career in stand-up comedy.
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