Screenwriting : I’ve read my script so much idk if it’s good or makes sense anymore. by Thomas Cummins

put it away for a few weeks (or months) Then read it fresh.

I agree with Marty. Walk away from it for a bit, maybe even write something else, then go back at it again.

Yup - same happened to me - I returned t it after 6 months and was able to improve it on a level that I didn't possible

I didn't mean half a year (facepalm)

Hi, Thomas Cummins. I agree with what everyone said about putting your script away and going back to it with fresh eyes. Getting feedback from different readers should help you know if your script's good and makes sense. Feedback is subjective, but if you get the same notes from different readers, that's a sign that your script might need more work.

Hi, I think we've all been there! I put it away for a bit and then revisit it but I also get coverage on it and that helps a great deal!. They see what you don't.

Most writers get overly attached to their own material. Find a few friends to read it for feedback. Real people who might be viewers. Or actor friends. Best wishes!

Letting it get cold after being consumed with it I find is one way to see it more objectively. A few months to a year, perhaps.

Learn more concrete tools as skill set. Take control of the story with them as well. Don t only expect the story to reveal its secrets.

Normal. Take a break. Read again and highlight anything (dialogue, character) that your gut doesn't like. When done, analyse why your gut doesn't like it. Revise accordingly. Don't be afraid to revise the whole thing. You'll be happier at the end of it.

You need audience feedback.

BTW, I go over 10 page script

selections every week on my YouTube channel

I step back and read something like a biography. The shower principle works well here.

are you in a script table read

I know I had to hear my script read and critique that helped me

I wrote it 3 times before I was satisfied with it now it is in production

The feeling is known all too well! If you're unsure you can always share some of your work amongst the community!

Print it out and take notes on it, red pen in hand! You get objectivity that way.

Very common. Writers often get so close to their story, they can't see the wood for the trees. Either put it away for a time and come back to it with fresh eyes or alternatively give it to someone who knows what they're talking about when it comes to storytelling and screenwriting for their objective and experienced feedback.

try taking a significant break from it - like, don't look at it for month. then come back and see how it reads

I joined the Stage32 Writer's Room. I've made some contacts on a few of the forums and weekly zoom meetings and have traded scripts. Gotten some really great feedback.

Take some time away from the script. Then have the computer read the script to you. You'll hear things that are wrong. Have some other screenwriters read it and give you feedback. Pay for Script Coverage or Consulting from one of the awesome Stage 32 mentors.

Tell your local group with no-budget filmmakers that you are willing to help them next time the film. Because when you see how people use other screenplays, it will be easier for you to read your screenplay in the way others will read it.

Listen to it. I use text-to-speech software to read the script to me. It isn't perfect but I can catch errors and get a better feel for a scene if I can hear it.

try taking a break from it and, don't look at it for month. then come back and see how it reads after detaching yourself and becoming more objective.

I'm gradually compiling a group of like-minded beta readers who aren't afraid to give, and get, honest feedback (for free). It may be worth finding out what other people think of your script. Tell them not to pull any punches.

It’s very normal and happens with all art forms. Just take a break from it for a while, like a month or so, and when you come back you can see it with clearer eyes. You mainly feel that way right now because you’re still deeply connected to your work :)

Sometimes, it can be helpful to have someone else read things back to you. I find that it helps me reignite with the piece. If you have someone you trust who is a good speaker and adapts well with storytelling, have them read it to you like they are acting it out for you. Hope this helps :)