Darshan Jaju's Lounge Discussions

Hello, everyone the above link is not working kindly watch the film on the following link:

https://youtu.be/jfD94JR0KEE

Tanveer Pial Sir kindly check the video on the following link

https://youtu.be/jfD94JR0KEE

Karmin Mosley Thank you for your wishes and feedback

The technical aspects of the film are very well done! It's clear you put a lot of effort into it. Since this is your first film, some viewers like me might be looking for a bit more unique story or surprising elements. This story is a bit predictable one and very straight, I must say. The plot could be further developed for a richer experience. Also, there's a brief moment where a third voice is audible saying 'Okay'—perhaps a little detail to polish for next time! Overall, this is a promising start, and with a bit more focus on those areas, your future work will be even more impactful. Just some minor things to keep in mind for future projects! Overall, this is a great start, and I'm excited to see what you come up with next. Thank you and congratulations.

Thank you Tanveer Pial I duly noted your points. I will keep it in mind while working on the next project. Once again thank you for your feedback and valueable thoughts.

Thank you Tucker Teague Maurice Vaughan for your wishes and feedback

Congrats, Darshan!

You're welcome, Darshan Jaju.

Very well done Darshan. Congrats!

Allen Lynch Thank you

Ok, thanks, Darshan Jaju. I'm working on a pitch deck job and I have two scripts to read. I can read your script once I'm done if that's fine. I'll message you when I finish.

That is spot-on CJ Walley

CJ Walley and Lawrence Davidson I appreciate your feedback and I'll do the necessary changes. Thank you for your inputs.

Maurice Vaughan no problem. Message me when you'll get time and I'll share my script with you.

Ok, will do, Darshan Jaju.

Hello everyone, I respect everyone's thoughts and opinions but personally I think that every writer has their own style and way of writing, and one has to explore what works for them. Practice, consistency and exploring yourself helps a lot while improving yourself as a writer.

Craig D Griffiths, all Russian classics studied psychology. all Russian classics were playwrights. no writer has become a classic unless he wrote scripts for the theater.

Dan Guardino, Yes, my belief is that in modern cinema, a screenwriter should know psychology. Although, of course, he may not know her, but this will limit his potential for skill growth.

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You're welcome, Darshan Jaju.

Hi, Darshan Jaju. I’m a Stage 32 Lounge Moderator. I wanted to let you know I moved your post from the Filmmaking/Directing Lounge to the Your Stage Lounge because it’s promotion. Promotion can go in the Your Stage Lounge (www.stage32.com/lounge/promotion) and on Your Wall.

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Hey, glad to know you're working with manager. Could you also help me out to find a manager or an agent? I'm starting out as a screenwriter and looking dor someone to pitch my script. Your help would be appreciated. Thank you and Good luck

Hey Darshan Jaju. The best I can do is to encourage you to do a few pitch sessions through Stage32. Also, network as much as possible and ask everyone you come into contact with if they know of any managers. Good Luck.

This is great, congratulation! I hope it all works out for you and keep us posted!

Way to go Anthony!! Congratulations on this fantastic achievement!

Bravo, Anthony! Best of luck! As for myself, I plan on taking a quick shortcut to representation. Walmart is having a sale on Lit Managers during their National Black Friday event this year. Plus, I'm going in armed with a 20% off coupon. Win-Win!

Welcome aboard, Darshan!

Hello Darshan! Here is an awesome video from our CEO Richard "RB" Botto on how you can get to a manager or agent to pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCP7s6Zz88c&t=3s. I'd highly recommend you follow him on instagram, as he gives great advice - @rbwalksintoabar.

Welcome Darshan.

Amanda Toney Thank you, much appreciated ☺️

Welcome Darshan! I am sure you will find what you need here on Stage32. Stage 32 has the best connections! Being persistent pays off. Wish you all the best on your projects.