Burchell C Hanson's Lounge Discussions

Burchell C Hanson
Looking for help

hello friends i'm looking for a pro. screenwriter to help me get to that final draft pleas. presently i have a action adventureworking on but need some help.

Orianna Morales

Hi! If you can present your main concern we can lead you to a solution.

Burchell C Hanson

if i could get someone to look at what i write and tell me what to cut and what to keep that would be a start.

Orianna Morales

Well Burchell, since that's our main bread and butter, have you sought coverage?

Burchell C Hanson

meaning? i had a feedback from an online website which was 80% negative which is ok. my problem is i have been checking the internet to see how its done and it seem to be the way i have it. could i send you something to look at?

Orianna Morales

Well Burchell, as I said this is bread and butter for some of us. What were you told?

Burchell C Hanson
Seeking an editor

hello guys, i want to enter my script in a contest very soon but i think it need to be edited. if you think you the person to do that for me pleas let me know. thank you. Burchell

Eoin O'Sullivan

Hi Burchell - perhaps you can provide a little more information? Is it a short or a feature, genre, logline etc.

Burchell C Hanson

its a feature, suspense/drama that much i know. the reason i say that is because i am a new writer who is familiar with the terms but need a lot of assistants to get on my way. thanks for your reply. Burchell .

Burchell C Hanson
Lets link up

want to link/meet with fellow new york screenwriters to discuss formatting and description. i follow the online sites but just need to get actual feedback. lets link up pleas. thanks

K. C. Steward, Screenwriter
Knowing the end at the beginning?

I've read that screenwriters should know how their scripts ends before starting to write. I find that even though I outline and flesh things out, my script creates its own ending organically. Do you usually know your ending at the beginning?

NicKhil Chavan

What if an idea struck to your instinct but you can't write a story further because you don't know the ending. So, will you drop that million dollar idea? I am sure, I won't make that mistake. I will...

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Tony McFadden

A tweet triggered an idea in July 2013. It took almost 15 months for me to figure out how it would end. I wrote two other books in that timeframe and let the idea percolate.

Lisa Molusis

Yes, I know my ending before I start writing. And if you think about it the only difference in an outline is that you're using truncated phrases to establish the story-- fewer words and broader stroke...

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Doug Nelson

If you know not where you’re going, it’s unlikely that you’ll ever get there.

Phillip E. Hardy, "The Real Deal"

I like to have an outline with an ending in mind. However, we are the writers creating our stories, characters and worlds in which they live. Therefore, we are omnipotent. When someone offers to pay me for my work, then they are omnipotent.

Burchell C Hanson
Is that a positive move

is it a positive move to tell a writer that their first script will never make it? is that how the industry works or , even if someone look at your work know its good but tell you it wont work. if you don't know how good a writer is how would you know their first work wont do the job. i just don't t...

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Michael Shandrick

Marvin. Actually, they are looking for something they haven't seen before. Good or not. If it's original they'll hire a writer to make it better.

Marvin Willson

Like I said - naive. There are plenty of fresh ideas out there, but why aren't they getting made? One word... EXECUTION.

Tiffy Diamond

I've helped a lot of my friends hone their screenwriting skills. In doing so I've never told them their first script was garbage. I gave the constructive criticism to help them re-work it and I've fou...

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Marvin Willson

Dan is absolutely correct. New writers need to understand it takes time to read and give notes on a script only to then have them look at you like you've lost your mind. A few years ago, I was asked t...

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Shane M Wheeler

I've not told people their first project was garbage (unless it really was), but sometimes it is difficult to shake people from a first project when their best move would be to put it aside and write...

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Lauren Jefferson
Writer & Script Consultant

Hi, Stage32! My name's Lauren and I'm currently working on a couple projects - one is a book slated for an Amazon.com release in early 2014. The other project is to develop my screenwriting skills so I can finally write a great spec. I currently have two writing credits to my name (online literary m...

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Richard "RB" Botto

Great post, Lauren! Awesome to have you and your talents here in the community! As a fellow writer, I can say with every confidence, you'll find a tremendous amount of support around here. Thanks for the shoutout on Twitter as well!

Jeffrey Apostol

Nice. "Jeff"s do it better. LOL! Welcome to Stage32 and wish you the best of luck.

Jason Prugar

HI Lauren, Welcome to Stage32! I will check out your blog. Best of luck to you! Jason

Burchell C Hanson

welcome lauren

Pat Savage

Welcome to Stage 32 Lauren! Good luck with all you do and dream and have fun and great success networking here :)

Melanie Seelinger
Http://www.imdb.me/melanieseelinger

I am an actress/producer/writer and I have a film that I am pitching soon to investors! My business partner and I are currently editing the pitch trailer and will be going to Hawaii on Monday to location scout, meet with businesses regarding our film and meet with talent and crew.

Burchell C Hanson

congratulations and lots of luck on your travels too

Pierre Langenegger

Fantastic news, Melanie. Congratulations and welcome aboard.

Teraisa J. Goldman

How'd everything come out? Any updates?

York Davis

Hi Melanie... exciting news!

Heather Hale

Congrats! Best of luck! Not a bad place to "have" to schlep! ;-)

Burchell C Hanson
Getting togetger

to my fellow screenwriters in the new york, nyc area, i would like to get together with a group or groups. someone let me know if the are a part of same and if i am welcome.

J. Brian
A word of caution about sharing your movie ideas!!!!!

Hey all.... just chatting with a new friend across the "pond" and wanted to share some advice with you that I shared with him. If you have an idea for a movie, NEVER share that idea with ANYONE until you have signed a NONDISCLOSURE AGREEMENT (NDA) with them concerning the idea. You may mean well and...

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Allen Lawrence

Great article Craig. Thank you for the insight.

Bill Taub

Let me underscore this advice. Do not tell people ideas. NDA or not. You will be a successful writer based on the execution of an idea. I can take that great idea you gave me and execute in a way that...

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Bill Taub

And with what we're going through invite those who are interested to this. https://bbemaildelivery.com/bbext/?p=email&id=e52ea5a9-cac8-e8b8-c241-62108047cee9

William Martell

8 Years Later...

Craig D Griffiths

I have been ignoring the Zombie posts. But sometimes a comment grabs my attention.

Richard "RB" Botto
Hold on a second...Jack Nicholson NOT Retiring
Jack Nicholson is not retiring from acting at age 76 - Breitbart
Jack Nicholson is not retiring from acting at age 76 - Breitbart
LOS ANGELES, Sept. 5 (UPI) -- Hollywood screen icon Jack Nicholson is not retiring from acting, contrary to a media report claiming he is, E! News said. A
Burchell C Hanson

thanks pat

Pat Savage

yuppers

Brian Shell

I'm reminded of KISS... and the Retirement Tour before the Retirement Tour's real Retirement Tour

Pat Savage

yuppers

Randall Roffe

amusing to see his photo with Pesci not long ago

Burchell C Hanson
Actually meeting people

i would love to meet people in my area that i can show my material and get feedback. i love to write and write some good stuff i think, but i need feed back. i'm in queens ny. who is in my neighborhood?

Anthony M. Siciliano
Introducing Myself & Interested in some advice

Hi everyone! My name is Anthony and I live in Raleigh, NC. I've actually been using Stage 32 for close to 7 months now, but just never got around to "introducing myself". I'm a college graduate from High Point University in N.C. with a B.A. in Electronic Media Communications. I graduated May 2011. I...

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Loredana Risiglione

Hi Anthony

Burchell C Hanson

hi AY. i am new to the site too and i hope you will get all the help and advise you need man.

Janet Scott

Welcome Anthony....

Mike Shiflett

Pursue the dreams...they are crucial.... IMDb.com/name/nm2959447

Richard "RB" Botto

Thanks for posting and sharing, Anthony. We have some very talented editors on this site who frequent the EDITING section of the Stage 32 Lounge. My advice is to be visible and ask questions over there! Guarantee you'll get the info you are looking for! Good luck.

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