hello friends i'm looking for a pro. screenwriter to help me get to that final draft pleas. presently i have a action adventureworking on but need some help.
hello friends i'm looking for a pro. screenwriter to help me get to that final draft pleas. presently i have a action adventureworking on but need some help.
hello guys, i want to enter my script in a contest very soon but i think it need to be edited. if you think you the person to do that for me pleas let me know. thank you. Burchell
Hi Burchell - perhaps you can provide a little more information? Is it a short or a feature, genre, logline etc.
its a feature, suspense/drama that much i know. the reason i say that is because i am a new writer who is familiar with the terms but need a lot of assistants to get on my way. thanks for your reply. Burchell .
want to link/meet with fellow new york screenwriters to discuss formatting and description. i follow the online sites but just need to get actual feedback. lets link up pleas. thanks
I've read that screenwriters should know how their scripts ends before starting to write. I find that even though I outline and flesh things out, my script creates its own ending organically. Do you usually know your ending at the beginning?
What if an idea struck to your instinct but you can't write a story further because you don't know the ending. So, will you drop that million dollar idea? I am sure, I won't make that mistake. I will...
Expand commentWhat if an idea struck to your instinct but you can't write a story further because you don't know the ending. So, will you drop that million dollar idea? I am sure, I won't make that mistake. I will start Brainstorming & try to figure out the best ending suitable for my Million Dollar Idea Story.
A tweet triggered an idea in July 2013. It took almost 15 months for me to figure out how it would end. I wrote two other books in that timeframe and let the idea percolate.
Yes, I know my ending before I start writing. And if you think about it the only difference in an outline is that you're using truncated phrases to establish the story-- fewer words and broader stroke...
Expand commentYes, I know my ending before I start writing. And if you think about it the only difference in an outline is that you're using truncated phrases to establish the story-- fewer words and broader strokes. My outline doesn't get as detailed as others and the story does can diverge from the outline as new ideas form while writing. I've found that if you don't know where your story is going, it's harder to structure and avoid meandering into a tangent or back yourself into a hole. Outlines allow you to write efficiently and only what's necessary.
If you know not where you’re going, it’s unlikely that you’ll ever get there.
I like to have an outline with an ending in mind. However, we are the writers creating our stories, characters and worlds in which they live. Therefore, we are omnipotent. When someone offers to pay me for my work, then they are omnipotent.
is it a positive move to tell a writer that their first script will never make it? is that how the industry works or , even if someone look at your work know its good but tell you it wont work. if you don't know how good a writer is how would you know their first work wont do the job. i just don't t...
Expand postis it a positive move to tell a writer that their first script will never make it? is that how the industry works or , even if someone look at your work know its good but tell you it wont work. if you don't know how good a writer is how would you know their first work wont do the job. i just don't think that's a positive thing to say, it's not motivating.
Marvin. Actually, they are looking for something they haven't seen before. Good or not. If it's original they'll hire a writer to make it better.
Like I said - naive. There are plenty of fresh ideas out there, but why aren't they getting made? One word... EXECUTION.
I've helped a lot of my friends hone their screenwriting skills. In doing so I've never told them their first script was garbage. I gave the constructive criticism to help them re-work it and I've fou...
Expand commentI've helped a lot of my friends hone their screenwriting skills. In doing so I've never told them their first script was garbage. I gave the constructive criticism to help them re-work it and I've found that they usually move on from it on their own. They continue to write and get better. If you're going to take the time to read someone's script, telling them it's garbage is a waste of time when you could tell them what they need to work on to get better. Also, the best way to know good writers is to read the screenplays of amazing movies.
Dan is absolutely correct. New writers need to understand it takes time to read and give notes on a script only to then have them look at you like you've lost your mind. A few years ago, I was asked t...
Expand commentDan is absolutely correct. New writers need to understand it takes time to read and give notes on a script only to then have them look at you like you've lost your mind. A few years ago, I was asked to read a newbie's first script and the biggest not I had was that he saturated the script with camera direction. I mean SATURATED... E.G " We dolly alongside the falling soldier as he falls in slow motion, as bullets pepper his chest lost his silent screams" I advised the writer of suggested ways to fix this and his response was "Well that's how they write it in the scripts I read online." I then told him that the majority of published, movie screenplays are shooting scripts, but alas, it fell on deaf ears. The nail in the coffin of our conversation was this statement "I think I'll go with what I have." I haven't seen or heard anything since.
I've not told people their first project was garbage (unless it really was), but sometimes it is difficult to shake people from a first project when their best move would be to put it aside and write...
Expand commentI've not told people their first project was garbage (unless it really was), but sometimes it is difficult to shake people from a first project when their best move would be to put it aside and write something new. I was very positive, full of constructive criticism, but my suggestion to put the novel aside and start something new fell on deaf ears. Last I heard, the novel they'd been writing for over five years is STILL being revised as we speak. I've found when revisiting my work after a few months of setting it aside, I can appreciate it more as if it were written by someone else, corrections are easier, and editing takes on new life. I can see better where I feel the story fails me as a reader, rather than as the initial writer. I find that distance to be invaluable in the process.
Hi, Stage32! My name's Lauren and I'm currently working on a couple projects - one is a book slated for an Amazon.com release in early 2014. The other project is to develop my screenwriting skills so I can finally write a great spec. I currently have two writing credits to my name (online literary m...
Expand postHi, Stage32! My name's Lauren and I'm currently working on a couple projects - one is a book slated for an Amazon.com release in early 2014. The other project is to develop my screenwriting skills so I can finally write a great spec. I currently have two writing credits to my name (online literary magazines) and one lame, experimental script under my belt. When I'm not working on big things, I maintain an author blog, Laurjeff Writes (http://laurjeffwrites.com/) so that my subscribers and followers can watch my writing career develop. From there you can also read the first draft ramblings of my book project. Professionally I've been working from home as a proofreader and script consultant. It's difficult but I love helping people figure out how to improve their work and I really love the underlying hunt for the next great, unknown writer. My goal is to make money as a writer, plain and simple. I hope to be involved in the film industry one day somehow, regardless. I was so excited to see this website, but I'm more excited to meet all of you! :) Lauren
Great post, Lauren! Awesome to have you and your talents here in the community! As a fellow writer, I can say with every confidence, you'll find a tremendous amount of support around here. Thanks for the shoutout on Twitter as well!
Nice. "Jeff"s do it better. LOL! Welcome to Stage32 and wish you the best of luck.
HI Lauren, Welcome to Stage32! I will check out your blog. Best of luck to you! Jason
welcome lauren
Welcome to Stage 32 Lauren! Good luck with all you do and dream and have fun and great success networking here :)
I am an actress/producer/writer and I have a film that I am pitching soon to investors! My business partner and I are currently editing the pitch trailer and will be going to Hawaii on Monday to location scout, meet with businesses regarding our film and meet with talent and crew.
congratulations and lots of luck on your travels too
Fantastic news, Melanie. Congratulations and welcome aboard.
How'd everything come out? Any updates?
Hi Melanie... exciting news!
Congrats! Best of luck! Not a bad place to "have" to schlep! ;-)
to my fellow screenwriters in the new york, nyc area, i would like to get together with a group or groups. someone let me know if the are a part of same and if i am welcome.
Hey all.... just chatting with a new friend across the "pond" and wanted to share some advice with you that I shared with him. If you have an idea for a movie, NEVER share that idea with ANYONE until you have signed a NONDISCLOSURE AGREEMENT (NDA) with them concerning the idea. You may mean well and...
Expand postHey all.... just chatting with a new friend across the "pond" and wanted to share some advice with you that I shared with him. If you have an idea for a movie, NEVER share that idea with ANYONE until you have signed a NONDISCLOSURE AGREEMENT (NDA) with them concerning the idea. You may mean well and almost every filmmaker out there wants to get their idea into the hands of someone who they think could possibly help them become the next Spielberg or Scott (R.I.P.)... but it is a bad idea. My own producers don't see anything from me until I know my idea is protected first. You can't copyright an idea, but you can sure as hell be sure no one steals it until the script is finished by not talking about. If you're not a writer but want your script written, find and get to know a screenwriter. Let them know you have an idea and ask them for a few samples of their work to be sure their writing style fits your concept (romance writers write crappy horror, “Twilight” for example.. LOL). Study up on NDAs and find one to tailor it for your concept. Send it to the writer, have them print it, sign it and send it back to you. Now, an NDA may or may not hold up in court, but at least you've taken the 1st step to protecting yourself and your idea and it will count for something if the idea is stolen. I am speaking from experience as someone who, back in 2002, when I was planning to make my first movie, got taken by a man I considered to be my “Yoda”.... he had been in the TV industry for 40 years. The one thing he failed to mention was the NDA. Needless to say, he stole the idea after having me rewrite more than ten times to fit his vision of my idea and then banned me from his set when I grew angry about it. I took my original script, found five actors and, with absolutely no formal experience at all, made my first movie on my own with no crew. I released mine in a local theater for 8 sold-out showings and have won several awards for it and he never finished his (which I wrote). His cast and crew quit because he continued to change the script and plot. Years later, I ran into him and forgave him for it. He told me he would like to try again someday and just laughed in his face and walked away. And that's just one story. However, on the flip side of this subject, there are millions of people in the world so the chances of another person having a similar concept to yours is very likely and happens quite often. Once, again, as per my experience with several TV shows and movies that have come out in the last 10 years or so, I had same idea written as a synopsis a year or two before theirs came out. This may make me even more eager to get my new ideas out there, but I have to exercise some restraint. So do you. Your day will come if you work hard enough and pursue your passion. So PLEASE do not share your ideas with ANYONE... especially on a website! Research and get familiar with NDAs, in this business you will be signing lots of them. Exercise some wisdom and patience, guys and gals. Good luck!
Great article Craig. Thank you for the insight.
Let me underscore this advice. Do not tell people ideas. NDA or not. You will be a successful writer based on the execution of an idea. I can take that great idea you gave me and execute in a way that...
Expand commentLet me underscore this advice. Do not tell people ideas. NDA or not. You will be a successful writer based on the execution of an idea. I can take that great idea you gave me and execute in a way that is totally mine and you're S.O.L. You do not want to get into litigation even if you win it. Meanwhile I have to share the surprise I got over the week-end. Nothing is ever dead! https://bbemaildelivery.com/bbext/?p=email&id=456f2c35-e7c3-2370-687b-9c0eceb97d4e
And with what we're going through invite those who are interested to this. https://bbemaildelivery.com/bbext/?p=email&id=e52ea5a9-cac8-e8b8-c241-62108047cee9
8 Years Later...
I have been ignoring the Zombie posts. But sometimes a comment grabs my attention.
thanks pat
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I'm reminded of KISS... and the Retirement Tour before the Retirement Tour's real Retirement Tour
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amusing to see his photo with Pesci not long ago
i would love to meet people in my area that i can show my material and get feedback. i love to write and write some good stuff i think, but i need feed back. i'm in queens ny. who is in my neighborhood?
Hi everyone! My name is Anthony and I live in Raleigh, NC. I've actually been using Stage 32 for close to 7 months now, but just never got around to "introducing myself". I'm a college graduate from High Point University in N.C. with a B.A. in Electronic Media Communications. I graduated May 2011. I...
Expand postHi everyone! My name is Anthony and I live in Raleigh, NC. I've actually been using Stage 32 for close to 7 months now, but just never got around to "introducing myself". I'm a college graduate from High Point University in N.C. with a B.A. in Electronic Media Communications. I graduated May 2011. I'm looking to make a career within film/television production and post-production. I've gained a few credits since moving to Raleigh. I was a set production assistant on a film called "Live-Evil" and a location assistant on "Grass Stains". I've also been hired to edit two short films. The first called "Romancing With Life" which has been accepted to a few small festivals. The second film, "Inside the Sound" was just completed and I actually had met the director/producer through Stage 32! If I stick with production, I'd eventually like to work my way to the camera department. Ultimately, I'd like to end up editing TV shows and feature films. I'm open to any advice anyone has to offer about working in the film & TV industry. Thanks!
Hi Anthony
hi AY. i am new to the site too and i hope you will get all the help and advise you need man.
Welcome Anthony....
Pursue the dreams...they are crucial.... IMDb.com/name/nm2959447
Thanks for posting and sharing, Anthony. We have some very talented editors on this site who frequent the EDITING section of the Stage 32 Lounge. My advice is to be visible and ask questions over there! Guarantee you'll get the info you are looking for! Good luck.
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Hi! If you can present your main concern we can lead you to a solution.
if i could get someone to look at what i write and tell me what to cut and what to keep that would be a start.
Well Burchell, since that's our main bread and butter, have you sought coverage?
meaning? i had a feedback from an online website which was 80% negative which is ok. my problem is i have been checking the internet to see how its done and it seem to be the way i have it. could i send you something to look at?
Well Burchell, as I said this is bread and butter for some of us. What were you told?