Adrian Long: Screenwriter.

Kathryn Zizek
Do you ever "dumb it down"?

If most readers get it/ solve the puzzle/ enjoy the twist/ follow the clues -- but the odd one misses the point or gets confused, should you make things more obvious?

Nick Phillips

Don't dumb down you work Kathryn Zizek! If they can't grasp it then that's their problem and those folks weren't the right people to read it anyway!

Lee Shargel

I so wholeheartedly agree with, Nick. If the reader is dumb to begin with they may just smarten up.

CJ Walley

Depends entirely on where you want to be. Your artistic voice is your artistic voice, and compromising that can cause a lot of pain, even if it leads to financial success.

Jody Parker
Just Arrived!

Hello! My name is Jody, and I just joined today. I’ve written some published indie comics and an infamous Harry Potter spoof. I’m working on a comedy screenplay and love being around creative people. I live in California with my two cute, demon-spawn, plant-destroying kittens. I love going to the ne...

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Jody Parker

Thank you Stefano Pavone! Hope you're having a great day.

Jody Parker

Kerry Kennard Yeah, I'm sure Los Angeles is more film-friendly than the sleepy California beach town I live in, haha. :D I love it here though. Thanks for the welcome!

Kerry Kennard

Glad you're enjoying it. Yep, one film music book said, it's here (LA) or England. - to do better and know the industry. You're close enough to for small adventures to find out. :~). Up to you!

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Maureen Mahon
Tracking a Lead Character from Young to Older

I have a question. I'm writing a biography based on a memoir. It follows the lead character from age 4 all the way to age 60. Is there a rule of thumb on what ages each actor would play the character from and to? Age 4 through 8? Then 9 through 12? I don't know! Also, how do you name them in the scr...

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Maureen Mahon

Adrian Long thanks! I'm still waiting for a more definitive answer - if there is one. :-)

Richard "RB" Botto

Hi Maureen Mahon. You don't have to worry about the actors and what ages they would play. That's up to the producer, director and casting director. Just write the script as you see it in your mind. Th...

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Maureen Mahon

Dan Guardino thank you. I agree it needs to be defined in the script. I'll check out that script and some others that have characters at different ages.

Adrian Long
Wait, I'm having a Flashback!

Hello everybody!

My style for thi...

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Marcel Nault Jr.

A flashback should be well-timed and chosen wisely. Don't overuse it.

Pat Alexander

i like to use flashbacks to provide twists that characters may not be who they previously seemed

Tania Cárdenas Paulsen

Los Flashbacks que utilizamos para dar información sobre los personajes suelen ser mucho más efectivos en términos narrativos y dramáticos si su presencia en en el relato cumple una función dramática...

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Adrian Long
SoCal Crime/Action Screenplay Collaboration.

Hello everyone,

I'm working on a crime/action/drama screenplay and I am looking for a Hispanic writing partner to collaborate with. This story has plenty of criminal action but at it's core is the family drama.

What I'm looking for:

• A collaborative spirit who is up for brainstorming and developing id...

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Maurice Vaughan

Hi, Adrian Long. I’m a Stage 32 Lounge Moderator. I wanted to let you know I moved your post from the Screenwriting Lounge to the Your Stage Lounge.

The Screenwriting Lounge isn't the place to find a w...

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Richard "RB" Botto

Hi Adrian. I'm RB, Founder and CEO of Stage 32. As a screenwriter, producer, actor and filmmaker, I know first-hand the challenges all creatives face finding work, landing representation, launching projects, securing funding and simply making the connections that will make a difference in their careers. That's why I created Stage 32. Since our launch in September of 2011, the community has grown to 1,000,000+ members representing every country on the planet making Stage 32 the social network uniquely populated with the most creative people on Earth.

This is a network for you, built by you. Lik...

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Amanda Toney

Hello Adrian -

Welcome to the community! I'm Amanda Toney, the Managing Director at Stage 32. Since 2013 I've been proud to oversee Stage 32's Next Level Education, which provides you the most up-to-date tools necessary to become a better creative.

Over the years Stage 32 has worked with over 500 industry executives and professionals to teach online webinars, classes and intensive labs exclusively for you - our Stage 32 community. We bring you instructors who have worked directly on some of your favorite films, TV shows or theater productions to teach you in-the-trenches information that you w...

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Tania Cárdenas Paulsen
Ding Zhillo
Victoria Stewart
Kathryn Zizek
Federico Alerta
Gregg LeRoy Allen
Robert Sacchi
Larry Biela
Hugh Potter
Benjamin Elliott
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