Screenwriting

Hola cómo están? Escribí una novela de ciencia ficción literatura. Cómo puedo hacer para que se convierta en película o serie? Hay concursos ? O donde se puede presentar el guion ? Soy nueva en esto

Thank you so much, Stage 32! I just received word that The Restless is a semifinalist and I'm so grateful! Congratulations to all my fellow writers, hope everyone is having a great holiday! xo

Hey everyone! I wanted to congratulate our fellow community members who had scripts requested through Stage 32 pitch sessions over the last 2 weeks. We are thrilled for the opportunities for the following writers to have their scripts requested by Zoic Pictures

507 Collectives, Mischief Entertainment, Citizen Skull, and more! Please join us in congratulating your fellow writers for their accomplishments!

Congrats to:

Gregory Marcel

Joan Moran

Peter Bartels

Odile Koudou

Gabrielle Nehring

Myna Sky

John Doble

Chuck Conaway

Parker Briscoe

Gabrielle Nehring

Brett Block

Lindsay Eleanor Smith

Crescent Novell

Molly Bandt

Judy Klass

John Park

Mechelle Bordeaux

Ed Teppe

James Brosnahan

Betsy Green

Bill Osinski

Nastaran Nouri

Autumn Cavender

Michael Nybrandt

Warren Bouchier

Clive Morris

Judy Klass

JR Rodriguez

Tanya Klein

Frederic Chast

Dylon Law

Lynn Heggen

Dr. Harms

Stan Evans

Christian Ruhen

Tom Morgan

Cassandra Mayo

Julie Georgina Shackman

Mechelle Bordeaux

Robert Husted

Nastaran Nouri

Skylar Schapiro

Plus! We had 38 meeting requests from producers for our writers! Congratulations to the following writers!

Emmanuel Saint-Ange

Ronald L. Ecker

Jamaal D. Pittman

Lynea Diaz-Hagan

Stan Evans

Will Jones

Hildegard Bruni

Mark Stouffer

Stephen Barber

Bill Brock

Odin Ozdil

Michael J. Shapiro

Nelsie Spencer

Alexander Shaida

Owen A Ratliff

Sharidan Sotelo

Staton Rabin

Bill Marmor

Anthony Murphy

Matthew Bonifacio

Heidi Stock

Elizabeta Betinski

Courtney Lochner

Chris Thomas

Trina Thornbury

Diane Thomassin

Sharidan Sotelo

Jeff Ingber

Joshua Keller Katz

Delaney Bishop

Mimika Muscillo

Thomas Newman

Michael J. Shapiro

Paul Doutrich

Julie Georgina Shackman

Tanya Klein

Dr. Harms

Julie Georgina Shackman

I just watched a webinar that stage 32 gave me for free. I really enjoyed and learned a lot. I’m a screenwriter and I wrote a screenplay about the mental illness I have called paranoid schizophrenia. It’s a comedy about the different stereotypes about the illness. Thank you stage 32 for that. Very much appreciated.

Matthew

Hi there-- just coming off a film, I had a crew member ask if I could put together a womens zoom group about this subject. I thought about it and did... late notice but I had a few cancellations for tomorrow morning 10:30-12ish on zoom PST

If you're interested in joining and want more info please contact me here with your email and I will send you the link et al. Limiting to 4 more people.

I'm a Lic. Psychotherapist specializing in ADHD for Creative-sensitives, and a Theater Professional and Film Biz person.

This is a chapter on pitching from my book, THE LAST REVEAL - Movies, Screenwriting, and the Decline of Western Cinemazation, but--NOTE--this is about pitching BEFORE the script is written, not as we do here at Stage 32, where we are pitching to get them to request the already finished script:

Here’s a subject near, if not dear, to most screenwriters’ hearts: pitching. We’ll present several views on the subject, plus my own, and then I invite any comments.

Screenwriter and director, Paul Schrader (TAXI DRIVER, RAGING BULL, MISHIMA), prefers to tell his story to people all through his conceptual process, and prior to writing his first draft. The tale steadily grows until it lasts as long as 45 minutes, improving with each telling based on the reactions he gets. This all sounds to me like an elaborate method to develop the sales pitch of the story, an effort to grow it, get comfortable with it. Schrader’s testing it like a play, a try-out in “the provinces,” a rehearsal for the verbal “premiere” on Hollywood’s “Broadway.”

In THE CRAFT OF THE SCREENWRITER, Edited by John Brady, Simon & Schuster, 1981, p. 286, Brady questioned Schrader about his approach to story conception, asking, "So you see (the) screenwriter initially as a raconteur rather than someone at a typewriter in an attic."

Schrader responded: "Without doubt it’s part of the oral tradition because it’s a form of storytelling: it’s not a form of literature at all. Your writing counts for nothing."

And later, "In the end it doesn’t matter whether you’re a good stylist or not. A lot of very good screenwriters have been bad stylists. And a lot of extraordinary stylists have been bad screenwriters. The only reason it needs to be written down is so that it can be remembered, memorized, rewritten, sold... things like that."

When asked if he sees a screenplay, then, as a blueprint, Schrader says, "At best. I think that a blueprint is even too confining a term, because one doesn’t usually change a blueprint for a house, and it’s possible to change a script in medias res."

With Schrader’s approach, there’s no doubt you’ll become great at telling your story. That can only help the pitch you do for a producer or development exec. The problems with it are, as I see them, two-fold. First, you run the risk of telling someone your story and finding that they react badly. This can kill your energy for the piece. Depending on your estimation of the worth of their opinion, it can scare you into abandoning the project in the belief that they know more than you do. The other is that, telling and re-telling the thing over several weeks or months, you may run the risk of boring yourself with it. Any bloom on that narrative rose is long gone in the months between the 2 minute version and that 45 minute epic.

Paul Schrader notwithstanding, most writers hate pitching, even just pitching to friends. I’m one. The psychoanalysts out there chalk it up to fear of people and public speaking. I disagree, as I suspect most other writers will, also. I have spoken before hundreds in formal settings, and while I was pumped, slightly nervous, it was no more than would be natural. Most writers have no problem with talking to people, even studio people, in other situations, when the work isn’t on the line. I believe we hate pitching because we feel we are selling the story short, giving it away prematurely, in a less-than-fully-developed state.

Screenwriter and director, Shane Black (LETHAL WEAPON, THE LONG KISS GOODNIGHT, KISS KISS BANG BANG) agrees: "I’ve found two things about pitching. Number one is that it’s bad for writers because if you’ve ever had a great idea that you want to put on paper, one of the best ways to f--k yourself up is to tell somebody about it and blow all the energy that you have stored up, especially in pitching, where you have to do it three or four times; by the time you get to the paper all your energy’s gone. Number two is that it’s the antithesis of good storytelling, because before you show your story to somebody, you tell them the ending. You go in and you say, ‘Here’s what happens, these guys do this and here’s how it ends.’ Then you go and write it and now they’re expected to be excited reading it. I mean, it’s just a bad idea."

Source – AMERICAN SCREENWRITERS, Edited by Karl Schanzer & Thomas Lee Wright, Avon, 1993, p. 39.

For me, my story is gold-in-the-making. But my story isn’t “my story” until long after the first FADE OUT is typed. It is only “my story” after the last FADE OUT is typed.

The problem is that the story in description is this bizarre thing that’s not really the story at all. It is instead a thing about the story. You go in there, brimming with energy and hope, fascinated with the possibilities, seeing the things you can and will do with it. But the guy behind the desk doesn’t know any of that. All he knows is that one-sentence description, the logline, and that you’re the thing standing between him and lunch. So you’re already in a hole. You tell him your two hour movie in 5 or 10 minutes, at most 20. No matter, even with Schrader’s 45, it’s still “reductio ad absurdum.” Then you expect him to intuit all of your ideas for the thing. But he’s thinking about restaurants and the afternoon meeting with [insert Oscar-winning screenwriter name here]. Oh, and have I mentioned the phone calls? Each one that comes in seems to be timed to ring just before a plot point. Ten minutes later, after he’s hung up and notices you’re still there, he says, “I’m sorry, [someone else's name], where were we?”

Even if you’ve managed to climb to the top of your hole, with that, you’ve just fallen back in.

“More water? Here, let me fill that [hole] of yours.”

And ramping up your energy when you sense he’s just not “feeling it” only serves to make you seem desperate and ultimately pathetic.

Screenwriter and director, David Koepp (JURASSIC PARK, STIR OF ECHOES, GHOST TOWN) says this about pitching: "Pitches suck. Pitches are a drag. Other than SPIDER-MAN, I’ve never had a pitch that worked out well, because somehow they heard it differently than what you said. Or you said it in a way that implied something it’s not. Any time you pitch something and they say, “Oh yeah, we’ll buy that!” by the time you turn it in either the person who bought it has been fired, or the person who bought it says, “Oh, that’s what you meant?” By then it’s too late because you’ve already accepted the money and there you are – stuck with a person that didn’t want your movie in the first place, or at a studio that wanted something else entirely.

"As long as you’re going to the trouble of putting together a good pitch and flying out to California and meeting with a bunch of people and hawking your wares, the amount of time and trouble that it takes, it doesn’t take that much more to write a first draft. Then you can be absolutely clear what it is, and besides, a script always ends up somewhere you didn’t imagine. Whoever you thought would love it can’t stand it, and somebody you never dreamed would be interested thinks it’s great. If all goes well. Of course, sometimes they all hate it."

Source – BACKSTORY 5, Edited by Patrick McGilligan, University of California Press, 2010, pp. 83-4.

Terry Rossio and Ted Elliott have an article on their excellent website, WORDPLAY, wherein they offer their take on pitching. They literally suggest writers pitch using a display board with 15 – 20 sequences printed on 5 ½” x 8 ½” “half-sheets” displayed by act. The advantages are that,

1. It shows the entire story in one viewing, allowing the buyer to see that the whole movie is there and flows dramatically and logically.

2. The buyer is no longer staring at the writer, and is instead focused on the board, taking some of the pressure off.

3. They claim it allows the buyer to ask better questions, and with greater confidence, as they can better grasp things visually than from an audio memory of your pitch in fast fade.

There may be something to this, but anything less than a finished script is starting underwater, if you ask me. This is especially true for new writers without previous credits. But it even happens to screenwriters fresh off an Oscar: Eric Roth tells of going to work with Robert Redford (on THE HORSE WHISPERER) after winning a Best Adaptation Oscar for FORREST GUMP, and Redford saying to him, “What have you done for me lately?” – BACKSTORY 5, p. 152-3. He was already back in that hole having to prove himself.

Industry professionals will tell you that pitching is a fact of screenwriting life, so it’s best to get as good at it as you can. If you’re comfortable with it, Paul Schrader’s “tell and re-tell” method should help a lot. That is, if you can transcend the inevitable bad or weak reaction you may get, especially in the early going. Then, when you get to that meeting, use every trick, including the Rossio and Elliott method. Honestly, I’d probably come into the room like Mr. Bean, dropping things, breaking my easel, or scattering my cards all over. It wouldn’t be pretty. But, if there’s any edge to be gained, I agree, you’ve got to try it...

Aw, hell, I still hate it. #

The following is something I wrote concerning theme in story. It might be of interest...

INT. A ROOM SOMEWHERE – DAY

PAUL SCHRADER sits across a table from RICHARD THOMPSON, a writer from Film Comment magazine. Schrader is in the midst of describing a memory:

               SCHRADER

     I got hit with two other blows

     to the body at the same time: my

     marriage fell through, and the

     affair that caused the marriage

     to fall through fell through, all

     within the same four or five months.

     I fell into a state of manic de-

     pression. I was living with someone

     at that time, and she got so fed up

     with me that she split. I was stay-

     ing in her apartment waiting for

     the cupboard to run out of food. I

     got to wandering around at night;

     I couldn’t sleep because I was so

     depressed. I’d stay in bed till four

     or five P.M. then I’d say, “Well, I

     can get a drink now.” I’d get up and

     get a drink and take the bottle with

     me and start wandering around the

     streets in my car at night. After

     the bars closed, I’d go to pornogra-

     phy. I’d do this all night, till mor-

     ning, and I did it for about three or

     four weeks, a very destructive syn-

     drome, until I was saved from it by

     an ulcer: I had not been eating,

     just drinking. When I got out of the

     hospital I realized I had to change

     my life because I would die and every-

     thing; I decided to leave L.A. That

     was when the metaphor hit me for

     Taxi Driver, and I realized that was

     the metaphor I had been looking for:

     the man who will take anybody any

     place for money; the man who moves

     through the city like a rat through

     the sewer; the man who is constantly

     surrounded by people, yet has no

     friends. The absolute symbol of urban

     loneliness. That’s the thing I’d been

     living; that was my symbol, my meta-

     phor. The film is about a car as the

     symbol of urban loneliness, a metal

     coffin. I wrote the script very

     quickly, in something like fifteen

     days. The script just jumped from my

     mind almost intact. As soon as I fi-

     nished writing – I wrote it for no

     commercial reason, just because I saw

     that was the need – I gave it to my

     agent and I left L. A.; I didn’t come

     back for half a year, just bummed

     around the country. It took that long

     before I was ready to come back and

     face the problems here.

    ---Richard Thompson, FILM COMMENT, March-April, 1976

As a writer, one aspect of the craft has always troubled me: the concept of theme. Back in high school the teachers loved to ask us what the theme of this or that was that we were reading. I could never pin it down. ROMEO & JULIET… was it unrequited love? No, that was CYRANO DE BERGERAC. What was the theme of MACBETH? HAMLET? I didn’t know. I read them, but I just couldn’t pull it out.

Later, when I began to write at a professional level, when I studied books on writing, they always talked about developing your theme, knowing it in advance, staying true to it, and most important of all, your story HAD to have one!

I dreaded conversations where others might ask me what the theme of this or that was from among my stories. I wouldn’t be able to tell them. I’d look like a fool, a pretender, who really didn’t understand writing at all.

So, long ago, I read another interview with Paul Schrader, the writer of TAXI DRIVER, who later went on to direct many of his own scripts. Something he said started me on the path to understanding theme:

"I think there are three steps to writing a script. First, you have to have a theme, something you want to say. It doesn’t have to be a particularly great thing, but you have to have something that’s bothering you. In the case of TAXI DRIVER, the theme was loneliness. Then you find a metaphor for that theme, one that expresses it. In TAXI DRIVER, that was the cabbie, the perfect expression of urban loneliness. Then you have to find a plot, which is the easiest part of the process. All plots have been done; they’re fairly easy, you just work through all the permutations until the plot accurately reflects the theme and the metaphor."

And, wait for it... 

"You push the theme through the metaphor and you should come out with the plot."

---PAUL SCHRADER: THE HOLLYWOOD INTERVIEW, by Alex Simon

So I examined my stories and I tried to see if I had done that. Did I have a theme that I had “pushed through a metaphor” to get me to the plot? Sometimes, yes. But no, I couldn’t find it in every case. Theme was still dogging me.

Years passed.

Then I saw a BAFTA Seminar Schrader gave that was viewable on YouTube. It was a lecture on Schrader’s screenwriting process. Now this was long after that interview he had done. But in it, he again brought up the metaphor and plot process he used. But here, he started, not with the theme, but with, what he termed, “a problem”. And yet, as he progressed he was describing the very same method he had used in the interview when conceiving TAXI DRIVER. But now, his theme of loneliness had become his “problem” of loneliness. 

So he pushed his problem of loneliness though his metaphor of a cabbie, and out came his plot for TAXI DRIVER.

Now I understood. 

The theme is the problem of the story. Not the “who-dun-it” of the mystery plot, for example, but the “why-do-it” of the protagonist: the dilemma within the central character that is driving her/his/its contention with the story problem of the plot. If you can get at the deep reason for why your protagonist is doing what he or she does what they do in the story, what they want, what they need, something they may not even know themselves, you will identify your story’s theme. 

And suddenly, clear as day, I saw the themes in my stories.

So, my theme in the process of this little saga I’ve just recounted, is, of course, the problem I had in understanding… theme! A Moebius Strip inside a Klein Bottle within a castle designed by M.C. Escher!

So, yeah… the theme is the problem. It has always been. 

FADE OUT

Someone asked me how professional screenwriters write outlines. I replied:

Writers write. Whatever way it works for them. When you start out, you're looking for the process. And over time you find out the only process is your process.

There are writers whose outlines are nearly as long as the finished piece. There are others who just write it, no outline. Paul Schrader makes a scene list, maybe 30 to 50 items. Then he tells the story to people and watches their reactions. The story grows until it's maybe 45 minutes long. Then he knows it can work.

The stereotypical screenplay outline is an almost skeletal, present tense, short story-styled telling of the movie. As flesh is added, and it begins to talk, it becomes a treatment, then a screenplay.

When I set out to write my first original screenplay—I had written adaptations and short scripts before that—I was sufficiently unsure of myself that I needed to see the whole story somehow complete on a single page. I had studied the form and decided to do it like this: I turned the paper horizontally, and at top left, I drew a line about one third across to the right. Then, writing as small as I could, I wrote tiny narrow columns of sequences of scenes, side by side hanging below the line from left to right and down about one third of the page. That was act 1. Then, just below those, I drew another line from left to right indented a little from the left, and ending a little before the right edge. I hung tiny scenes from that line down about another third of the sheet. That was act 2. Finally, i drew a third line below those, across from left to right starting two thirds of the way in from left, and hung more tiny columns of scenes from it. Act 3. I extended the line with a little arrow from act 1 pointing down and back left toward the act 2 line, and did the same for act 2 to 3. It went across the top, zigged down and back, went across further to the right, zigged down and back again, and then across to rhe left all the way right. In that way, I had the whole movie before me, and it looked like a progression from top left to bottom right. That gave me the confidence to script it. I laugh at it now, but I needed to believe, and this enabled me to do that.

My current approach is this: I make a few notes. I add scenes as they occur to me. Some dialogue appears. More scenes. Pretty soon it's 20 pages. I set it aside. After a while, a few more ideas occur. It gets longer. More dialogue. More scenes. I set it aside. I think about it. Steam gathers. I wait.

When I can no longer resist, I begin reformatting the outline that has now progressed to a treatment, into a screenplay.

An outline is a moving target. It should be messy, full of margin notes, arrows running from page three to pages five and one. It should seem unbalanced, distorted. It shouldn't work yet. That's when you know you're onto something, because you already see the story in your head before you can tell it.

So accept your own approach, your method. It will change as you grow as a writer. This is normal.