Screenwriting

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Logic in Screenplays and Films

This is from a piece I wrote:

FADE IN:

REVERSE ANGLE – FULL VIEW OF PART OF THE [MT. RUSHMORE] MONUMENT

WE SEE the tiny figures of Thornhill and Eve approach the edge.

WAIST SHOT – THORNHILL & EVE

As they peer down

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POINT OF VIEW

The president’s faces as seen from the edge, with moonlight revealing th...

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Maurice Vaughan

Lee Matthias I can deal with small non-logical things in movies and shows. But if there are too many small non-logical things -- or big non-logical things -- it pulls me out of the story, and I might...

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Maurice Vaughan
Celebrate the December 2024 Stage 32 Community’s Successes

Stage 32 members had a lot of success in December! Check out today’s blog to read the success stories and celebrate with everyone in the comments. www.stage32.com/blog/celebrate-the-december-2024-stage-32-communitys-suc......

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Nick Phillips
First Wednesday Webcast of 2025 | LONGLEGS Writer/Director Osgood Perkins Joins Us for The Exec Hour in The Writers Room on 1/8 at 4pm PST!

HAPPY NEW YEAR, SCREENWRITING LOUNGE! Hope everyone had a fantastic holiday season, and welcome to 2025! I'm feeling like this is going to be a great year, folks, I truly am. And to kick it off, we will be joined by my old friend and very talented filmmaker Osgood Perkins, writer-director of the run...

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Maurice Vaughan
Visualize the Scenes

Something I do when I outline, write, and rewrite is visualize the scenes. It helps me think of ideas and find problems with the story and characters. I visualize the action, the location, where characters are standing/sitting/etc., and what’s going on in the background. Try it out and see what happens.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Sandra Isabel Correia. Thanks. Everything in her uniform is important to her fights with the monster. Nothing's for show.

Maurice Vaughan

Glad it's helpful, Debbie Elicksen!

Anna Marton Henry

Maurice Vaughan This is absolutely essential for writing visually! Also time out the action in the scene to make sure it takes up as much space on the page as the time it would take on screen. Also th...

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Maurice Vaughan

Happy New Year, Anna Marton Henry! Those are great tips! I really like "think about how to make the scene richer with information - for example, what could characters be doing while talking that would...

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Martin Reese

Great advice Anna Marton Henry Definitely something I'm incorporation into my writing Don't just have talking heads. What are the characters doing while talking?

Pat Alexander
Early Bird Deadline Today: 2nd Annual Period Piece Screenwriting Contest

Hey friends, today is the Early Bird Deadline for the 2nd Annual Period Piece Screenwriting Contest. So now is the time to flash back to the past and immerse us in history with your scripts! This year's judges feature execs from CAA and producers on films such as THE TRIAL OF THE CHICAGO 7, LADY MAC...

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Maurice Vaughan
January 1, 2025 is Public Domain Day: Works from 1929 are open to all, as are sound recordings from 1924!

And you can find more material from 1929 at https://onlinebooks.library.upenn.edu/cce/.

Do you see a...

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Public Domain Day 2025 | Duke University School of Law
Public Domain Day 2025 | Duke University School of Law
Tweet January 1, 2025 is Public Domain Day: Works from 1929 are open to all, as are sound recordings from 1924!
Ashley Renee Smith

Thanks for the reminder, Maurice Vaughan!

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Ashley Renee Smith. I have my eye on a few things that's on the list. There's a lot to pick from!

Debbie Elicksen

Maurice Vaughan I have a folder of a few stories that fall under public domain, in case I'm so inclined to revisit. :)

Maurice Vaughan

I like that idea, Debbie Elicksen. I'm gonna start a folder. Thanks for the idea. I can't wait to put spins on public domain stories and characters! I did it before with a Humpty Dumpty short story....

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Bill Brock
Brock's screenwriting clubhouse:

So, I recently gambled $6.99 for a one-month membership to NETFLIX, allowing me to scour its vast library and settle on 21 chosen titles to watch before said membership ends on January 22nd. One title, "Woman of the Millisecond," I mean, "Hour," left me scratching my head, wondering, "WHAAAAAAT?" Fr...

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Geoff Hall

Bill Brock hi Bill, I watched this because everyone was shouting at me to do so, but in the final analysis it just left me cold. It was like I was a detached observer watching the film. True, your afo...

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CJ Walley

I haven't had a Netflix subscription in years. Just feels like the platform is a Twitter account making movies.

Regarding the age of the protagonist, yes it's implausible, but, if you have a thriller p...

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Dan MaxXx

The writer must have a sweet Netflix deal; the poster credits has the writer with same font size and placement as the director.

Pat Alexander

Having also recently watched the movie, I could see the intrigue of that story on paper. It's one of those "wow that's crazy" ideas that come through development that producers will take a flier on, a...

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Ashley Renee Smith

The writer actually doesn't have a Netflix deal. Ian wrote the original version of the script years ago. I read it back in 2017 I believe, when it was being used as his spec and going by the title, Ro...

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John Mezes
2025 Wishes!

Have a happy, creative & ambitious New Year everyone!

Debbie Croysdale

To a new chapter! Happy New Year.

Billy Kwack

Happy new years

Robert Franklin Godwin III

John Mezes Happy New Year. I willl work to make it a productive one. Resolution- Two novellas and one screenplay by this time next year.

Sam Rivera
CONGRATS! 57 Script Requests and 52 Meeting Requests in the last 2 weeks! 12/31

Hey everyone! I wanted to congratulate our fellow community members who had scripts requested through Stage 32 pitch sessions over the last 2 weeks. We are thrilled for the opportunities for the following writers to have their scripts requested by

Affirmative Entertainment, Neon Kite, Zoic Pictures,...

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Aj Writer

Congrats to everyone!

Pat Savage

Sam Rivera Stage32 at it's finest

Isaac Randolph

congratulations to everyone hope we see your vision on screen oneday!

Jack Binder

Amazing and Outstanding!! Bravo Writers and Sam Rivera and @stage32! Cognratulations!!

Doug Kayne

Congrats to everyone on this list!

Mark Deuce
Happy 2025 to Everyone!!

Check out my new project!

Please let me know what ya think.

Cheers,

Mark

Title: Sheroes

Logline:

Four ordinary women from diverse backgrounds are thrown together by chance when they stop a major crime. Their newfound fame propels them into a world of unexpected heroism, testing their mettle, friendships,...

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Maurice Vaughan

Happy New Year, Mark Deuce! I really like the title and concept! I think your logline could be tightened up. Here’s a logline template that might help: After/when ______ (the inciting incident/the eve...

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Lindsay Docherty
Getting a manager

Hi so I've written a novel and currently on the second in the series but I also wrote screenplays. How do I get a manager for tej screenplay writing?

Maurice Vaughan

Welcome to the community, Lindsay Docherty. I’m a Stage 32 Lounge Moderator. I wanted to let you know that I moved your post from the Introduce Yourself Lounge to the Screenwriting Lounge since it's a...

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Lindsay Docherty

This is great advice thank you so much.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Lindsay Docherty. Happy New Year! Hope you get a manager!

Lindsay Docherty

Thank you and a happy new year to you

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Lindsay Docherty.

Maurice Vaughan
Writing Nonlinear Scripts

Happy Holidays, everyone! I’m thinking about writing a nonlinear feature script. I might write a few nonlinear short scripts as practice, then write a feature script. Do you have any tips for writing nonlinear scripts?

Eric Christopherson

I usually don't enjoy nonlinear films. Now and then though I will. Memento comes to mind. And one of my all-time favorite noirs qualifies as non-linear too, I think: Out of the Past. I think the probl...

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Sarah Jones

Not a film or a short, but I would highly recommend checking out the show DARK on Netflix for Inspo on this very topic (which I'm a huge fan of :)

It's in German, and I thought it did a fabulous job o...

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Maurice Vaughan

Thanks for the advice, Eric Christopherson. It's hard for me to watch a complex movie when I'm tired. I'd rather watch something quick and easier to follow like a sitcom episode....

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Maurice Vaughan

Thank you, Sarah Jones. I just added DARK to my Netflix list.

Geoff Hall

Maurice Vaughan Dark is a great story, Maurice, which looks at fractured time and the influence of certain numbers across different timescapes.

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