Hi friends, directors,
I have a question for you. I’ve just finished the first draft of my film “Fast as a Fly”. I believe the theme is very relevant: modern youth often seek quick and easy success, money, fame, and so on. Many dive into social media, blogging, and content creation, hoping everything will happen fast — but it rarely does.
I’m writing this film in short, dynamic scenes, to make it feel similar to YouTube, TikTok, Instagram videos, etc.
I’d love your opinion: am I on the right track, or should I create longer, more traditional cinematic scenes?
Thanks in advance for your comments!
Below is the synopsis:
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SYNOPSIS:
Steve is a struggling boxer living in London. He’s not very good, and every fight feels like a battle; he loses more often than he wins. Boxing is mostly for his mother, Linda, a former promoter in Saudi Arabia who moved to London with her husband, Muhammad, a scientist obsessed with studying flies and creating medicines based on their DNA.
Steve knows that becoming a great boxer requires years of training and dedication, but he wants instant success. One night, he brings his girlfriend a chemistry and biology student to his father’s lab to show her where he works. After a few drinks, Steve accidentally consumes a mysterious elixir left on the lab table.
The elixir transforms him: he begins seeing the world in slow motion, his reflexes become superhuman, and he gains incredible strength. Suddenly, Steve dominates the boxing world. With his mother as his promoter, he quickly rises to Olympic glory and then world champion status.
But the elixir has a deadly side effect: it accelerates aging. Linda soon realizes that her son is aging rapidly. Within her, the professional promoter and the loving mother wage a painful battle. When she finally accepts that Steve won’t survive, she decides he should live a bright, unforgettable life full of victories, achievements, and wealth even if it means burning out too soon. Muhammad, however, never understands her decision and continues desperately searching for a cure.
Steve’s health deteriorates rapidly, his strength fades, and eventually he starts losing fight after fight. The pressures of fame and decline take a toll, his mother dies of a heart attack, and soon after, his father perishes in a lab fire.
Just as it seems Steve’s life is over, he wakes up young again. The elixir was never consumed he had merely fallen asleep after drinking. His girlfriend, who never would have let him drink it, reassures him. The terrifying vision was a dream, a warning about shortcuts and ambition.
Steve emerges with a renewed understanding: true success comes from hard work, discipline, and perseverance not magic or quick fixes. He returns to the gym, ready to build his strength, his skills, and his life the right way.
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Expand comment“Honestly, this piece wasn’t about color grading at all. It’s pure bloopers. I was trying to film an audition about Wi-Fi and life, and life decided to crash the set mid-take. So I just rolled with it. My goal wasn’t perfection—it was showing how I adapt and find comedy in the chaos. “This wasn’t about creating a cinematic reel. It was about showing my skill and ability to improvise — to adapt when things don’t go as planned. What started as a simple audition turned into a moment of spontaneity. I messed up, I shifted gears, and I turned it into something funny because that’s who I am. I love making people laugh, and even in bloopers, there’s a bit of magic in that.”
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“Now, if you’re looking for something scripted, color-graded, and fully produced — I can do that too. I’ve actually got a project in development that leans more cinematic, with a defined script and...
Expand comment“Now, if you’re looking for something scripted, color-graded, and fully produced — I can do that too. I’ve actually got a project in development that leans more cinematic, with a defined script and tone. This blooper reel just happened to be the raw side of what I do.
My skills come from years of watching and learning from others — producers, directors, and performers I’ve worked alongside for over a decade. I’ve been on set, I’ve studied the craft, and I eventually started creating my own work. I don’t claim to be a director; my strength is in performance. Acting is what I do, and it’s what I love.”
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That’s such a great journey Alyssa— learning through experience on set is honestly one of the best teachers there is. You can really feel the difference when someone understands performance from the i...
Expand commentThat’s such a great journey Alyssa— learning through experience on set is honestly one of the best teachers there is. You can really feel the difference when someone understands performance from the inside out. Acting gives such a strong foundation for storytelling, even when you’re not behind the camera.
My problem is, I don’t know how to put in words onto a script, especially for this place .. like I’m not sure how to put it but I guess I’m a realist so I am one of those people that if you’re comfort...
Expand commentMy problem is, I don’t know how to put in words onto a script, especially for this place .. like I’m not sure how to put it but I guess I’m a realist so I am one of those people that if you’re comfortable about being yourself and you can do that on camera or then we can work together and that’s where my comedy comes out. That’s where you see my brain scribble scrabble on camera. But I can never really put that into a script because I can’t explain how to set up a scene know what I would like. I’m more of open to ideals and collaborating, but I can’t really put it on, a script .. i’m sure I can but my idea of script is also based off things that I’ve learned or practice on my own .. I’m from an industry that gets scrutinized more then ever, and everyone has this idea that being in my industry is all about sex and we are all having sex with other. Absolutely not I have worked with one amazing producer/ director Blazed Studios AVN nominated .. he brilliant and he more of the business side of thing and I was more of the talent and we collaborated so great together he taught me a lot. But now I’m trying to make a transition into something I’ve always been good and that just being yourself and myself is funny lol on screen off screen.